Goes real slow
It seems that you have an interesting story to tell.. But the walls of text are pretty boring. Maybe you could narrate it while the text is shown. Since everyone hears their own voice in their head when they read, I'd suggest you put your own voice in there, and read it the way you want it to be heard.
I just happened to be in a good enough mood to read through all that, but honestly people will see how slow it's going and just close it. Add some voice if it gets blammed, and maybe even if it doesn't.
Hey that's good stuff. You certainly had it right when you said it's better than most other people's retarded ones.
There is one thing though, in the "Difference between buttons and movie clips" section you say that the HIT keyframe in the button symbol shows after the button's action is performed.. That's actually what decides the clickable area of your button so you should put a filled shape over the part of your button that you want clickable.
That was awesome
I tell you what, that was real good. I am impressed at the smooth fbf and you really achieved the mood, though I'm sure you could've reworded the story a little better. Man, very nice. It was a pleasure to watch. See you around.
Looks almost professional, nice graphics
Your characters are pretty cool and the joke was good. Yeah, it was too short to say much more. I did like it though, it was real clean and not intentionally crappy.. for this I vote 4, hoorah!
S.O.A.D. is A.W.E.S.O.M.E
My favorite part was the fbf silhouettes, they were so freaking smooth and accurate.
Blatant RayMan rip-off if you ask me.
LOL, dude. So true
HAHA I loved the McDonald's part, man I work there and it is all soo true! All the stuff on the menus up top were hilarious!
Gave you a 5
I liked it very much. So many different drawing styles at once! It was a lot of fun to watch and I am gonna show it to people :)
You're a good artist, I'll give you that much.. What was with all the same sounds mixed together for different things!? That sucked. The good part was the joke with the toothpaste. :)
I love the frame-by-frame look. Looked like he was humpin' his horse, tho. JK! This flash is crunk, fo' shizzle! (gave it a 4) :-P
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